Redactification

Urer, V'yy yvira guvf cbfg hc n yvggyr ovg.

Gur jbaqreshy cubgb bs gur tevaavat Pehvfr vyyhfgengrf ornhgvshyyl gur ernfba jul V guvax guvf ercbeg zvtug abg or gehr, be ng gur irel yrnfg, zvtug or cerzngher. Purpx bhg uvf grrgu. Gung'f evtug, Pehvfr unf bayl guerr vapvfbef - ur jnf obea jvgu n shfrq, zvqyvar vapvfbe. Ur'f unq qragny jbex, vapyhqvat erfuncvat naq nqhyg oenprf, gb zvavzvmr gur noabezny nccrnenapr bs guvf gbbgu - va rneyl cubgbf lbh'yy svaq ur nyzbfg arire fzvyrf, naq jura ur qbrf lbh pna frr gung gur zvqqyr vapvfbe vf sernxvfuyl jvqr.

Zvqyvar vapvfbe pna or n sbezr sehfgr bs ubybcebfraprcunyl, n flaqebzr juvpu va vgf zber frirer znavsrfgvbaf pna yrnq gb plpybcvn, shfvba bs gur sebagny yborf, n cevzvgvir cebobfpvf vafgrnq bs n abfr (ybpngrq nobir gur shfvba rlronyy), naq bgure tevfyl noabeznyvgvrf. [Pnhgvba: qvfgheovat zrqvpny cubgbtencuf.]

Gur onovrf ner hfhnyyl nobegrq be fgvyyobea, juvpu vs lbh erpnyy jnf gur sngr bs Avpbyr'f svefg pbhcyr bs certnanapvrf (nsgre gur svefg bar, fur pynzzrq hc nobhg vg.)

Shegure rivqrapr bs guvf urevgnoyr genvg pbzrf sebz Pehvfr'f uvfgbel; uvf ovbybtvpny sngure jnf zvyqyl ergneqrq naq orng uvz frireryl nf n puvyq. Zvyq ergneqngvba, jvgu be jvgubhg ivbyrag orunivbef, pna nyfb or cneg bs na vapbzcyrgr ubybcebfraprcunyl flaqebzr.

Nzhfvatyl, bar bs gur trarf sbhaq gb or zhgngrq va ubybcebfraprcunyl vf pnyyrq fbavp urqtrubt. Vg vf n uhzna nanybt bs n trar svefg qrfpevorq va Qebfbcuvyn sehvg syvrf; rzoelbf jvgu gur trar xabpxrq bhg qrirybc n fcvxl nccrnenapr naq ner aba-ivnoyr. Zber guna bar trar xabpxbhg cebqhprq guvf 'urqtrubt' nccrnenapr; fbzr jnt qhoorq guvf zrzore bs gur urqtrubt snzvyl "fbavp."

Va nal rirag, V fhfcrpg Pehvfr zvtug pneel bar be rira n cnve bs gurfr ubybcebfraprcunyl trarf, naq vs fb, guvf certanapl zvtug abg znxr vg. V ubcr V'z jebat, gubhtu; ab znggre ubj lbh srry nobhg Gbz Pehvfr, trargvp qvfrnfrf ernyyl fhpx.