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21 August 2007

AskMecha: I need some suggestions for this essay question: "If you could step into someone else's shoes for a day, who would it be and why?"[More:]It's for my business school application. I've been trying to position myself as an atypical applicant (which is a bit of a challenge considering my finance background is very typical). But I still need this to say something about why they should let me in their business school, so I'm worried about picking an artist or something like that.

My brainstorm so far:
- Initial reaction: someone famous. GW Bush, Al Gore, Warren Buffett. All too obvious. Jon Stewart, a little less obvious but meh.

- Some more thought: my brother. He's three years younger, struggled for a bit with depression and was trying to follow in my footsteps academically and professionally. Eventually, and thankfully, he went with his passion and decided to go to architecture grad school. I worry that this may be a little too personal and wouldn't give the admissions committee much to go on.

- Trying to get creative: a middle-class or lower-income family trying to avoid foreclosure in a speculative real estate market. This sounds better--I'll be able to tie in my finance background and show that I take business ethics seriously.

Any comments on my brainstorming, or other suggestions? Thanks!

Note: I may or may not actually apply. I'm also looking for a job. But this is a backup plan.
When I saw your question on the front page, I immediately thought "Hey, how about Darius McCollum, that wacky guy who kept hijacking subway trains?"

Then I saw that you were applying to business school.

So perhaps that might not be an appropriate choice.

How about a unique character you've met in real life, someone who's made a strong impression on you, someone you -- most importantly -- like, and someone who would be an interesting character if you encountered him in a novel or film? Someone who can capture their attention, stand out from the thousands of essays they receive, and still convey whatever impressions you want to make as an applicant.

That's my suggestion.
posted by jason's_planet 21 August | 20:09
How about Warren Buffet? He's a businessy guy.
posted by ThePinkSuperhero 21 August | 20:09
Bozo the clown - because I have big feet and I know that I'd be comfortable in his huge shoes, whereas I couldn't guarantee that in most other people's shoes.
posted by plinth 21 August | 20:09
No, wait, I think you should be Carrie Bradshaw.
posted by ThePinkSuperhero 21 August | 20:10
NO WAIT- George Soros.
posted by ThePinkSuperhero 21 August | 20:10
NO WAIT- Twinkie. Life as TPS's dog. THAT would be fine reading.
posted by ThePinkSuperhero 21 August | 20:11
an illegal immigrant
posted by stynxno 21 August | 20:11
NO WAIT (serious suggestion)- you should be mathowie, or someone else who made their living on the web, in ways most of society possibly could not understand.
posted by ThePinkSuperhero 21 August | 20:12
jason's_planet: The McCollum guy is interesting. And his last name is eerily close to mine (and actually derives from the same Scottish clan). Probably wouldn't work for this purpose, but thanks for alerting me to his existence.
posted by mullacc 21 August | 20:13
spencer from the Hills.
posted by stynxno 21 August | 20:14
HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA.

yes PLEASE.
posted by ThePinkSuperhero 21 August | 20:15
you're welcome! anytime!
posted by jason's_planet 21 August | 20:24
I like the idea of writing about your brother because "he went with his passion" is a great segway into your desire to continue your education in the field that is your passion kind of thing. A bit hokey, but the question they have is, in itself, a bit hokey. Course, I know nothing about the business school mind set. It may be someone like Soros is better. Or, the guy (don't know name/cite) who started the small business loans to women entrepreneurs.
posted by mightshould 21 August | 20:42
Oooh, that's a good spin on that idea, mightshould! Thanks.
posted by mullacc 21 August | 20:43
Michael Schumacher. The quintessential b-school, uber-alpha-male role model.
posted by paulsc 21 August | 20:45
Muhammed Yunus is the man who founded Grameen, the microcredit bank. He might be a bit obvious, since he recently won the Nobel peace prize. But if you're OK with that, I think he'd be a great person to talk about (or equally, one of the Bangladeshi women who benefit from Grameen microfinance).
posted by matthewr 21 August | 20:47
How about a unique character you've met in real life, someone who's made a strong impression on you ...
Second this - for an application to a business school (not that I know about such things, being an uneducated idiot), what about picking someone in business who has inspired you (or one you can gather enough details about to fake it convincingly, which is probably easier)? That sounds like the sort of thing they would be looking for - being an atypical applicant may be fun, but it may also cruel your chances.
posted by dg 21 August | 20:59
Maybe it'd be interesting to take it from a negative perspective, i.e. pick someone who made a big financial mistake and write about how you'd like to get insight on how psychology influences business decisions. I'm thinking along the lines of Long Term Capital Management, or the trader who blew up Amaranth...
posted by lalex 21 August | 21:25
It doesn't matter who you pick. They want to know how you can explain an idea and maybe a little bit about how you think. I'd say you'd have more luck going with talking about your brother or someone a little more off the beaten path of super famous, super businessy. They're going to read 100 papers about GWB and want to die after they're done.

Keep in mind that its not as much about who you pick but why you want to BE THEM They could just ask who you'd want to have dinner with, but this is about being in someone's shoes, sort of like you said about the middle class folks dealing with mortgage stuff, but I think it would be hard to talk about that without getting dramatic and maudlin. Whose perspective could you have for a day and have it be something that expanded your world or taught you something? Think about that first, then worry about the paper.
posted by jessamyn 21 August | 21:52
Which business school? The range of choices for applying to Harvard would be quite different from, say, DeVry. The first would seek to determine your analysis skills, while the second would hope for somewhat accurate punctuation.
posted by mischief 21 August | 21:59
University of Chicago. So nearer the Harvard standard. Not that my punctuation doesn't need work.
posted by mullacc 21 August | 22:01
Also, this essay has a 500 word limit and is only one of several essays.

Anyway, thanks for all the answers. This will give me a good start as I begin writing. Of course, don't hold back any further suggestions.
posted by mullacc 21 August | 22:08
good luck!
posted by jason's_planet 21 August | 22:11
George Washington
posted by Hugh Janus 22 August | 09:01
I was going to say Bozo, for about the same reason as plinth, so instead I'll say Richard Reid.
posted by klangklangston 22 August | 14:31
Get it down your neck || Is anyone playing Bioshock yet?

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